英文添削に挑戦【英会話を電話、携帯、スマホ、スカイプで トークライン】

画像引用:Audience In Movie Theater 1935
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10月7日の英文添削「日本語での解釈例」への挑戦として以下のものを書いてみました。講師のどなたかに添削して頂き結果を後日投稿します。これを機会によい英文が書けるようになりたいと思います。

 

My wife and I were enjoying a picture show in Redondo Beach, Calif.  Back then, “Movie” and “Movie theater” were beginning to be used among some people, but “Motion picture” and “Picture theater” still sounded much more congenial to most of us.  Then suddenly an earthquake struck.  For an instant we felt as if the theater were being carried on the back of a charging elephant.  The majority of the audience started from their seats.

 

In the center of the theater, a woman stood up.  “Don’t get excited!” she cried shrilly.  “Keep your seats, everyone!”  An idea struck me.  “In a situation like this, someone who can grab the situation fast, and who can lead the people would come forward.  The person is a spontaneous leader.  We are just witnessing the appearance of such a spontaneous leader, aren’t we?”  Everyone must have shared my thought, because almost to a person the audience sat down.  “Let’s follow the instructions from this spontaneous leader to cope with this situation,” we all thought, and waited for her next instruction.

 

Then, to our consternation, the lady calmly walked out.

 

The lady was not a spontaneous leader after all.  Her concern was not about all of us in the theater, but about herself.  She was only trying to make room for herself to get out of the theater quickly.