英文添削結果を受け取りました【英会話を電話、スマホ、スカイプで トークライン】

画像引用:Schools urged to turn out computer whiz kids – The Local
https://www.thelocal.ch/userdata/images/article/1ec56238697b939431153d0e8845490cd98b15fb604b5ec08456c154db612b30.jpg

8月27日投稿の添削結果を受け取りました。正しい英文を書くのは難しいことを実感しますがその内添削箇所ゼロとなるように努力したいと思います。

 

My five-year-old son was pestering us for an iPad.  “My friend brought his to school, and I want one too,” he insisted.  We had seen the computer whiz kids on TV.  Since when did that begin as young as five years old?

 

Why was it an iPad, not an iPhone in the first place?  Moreover, our son has never even touched an iPhone, let alone used one.  “Absolutely not,” said my husband.  “they’re expensive and fragile.  Besides, what would you even do with an iPad?”

 

Our son replied, “I’d put it over my eye and play pirates with my friends.”

 

What flashed in my mind was our son placing an iPad on his face.  It’s ridiculous.  We finally realized that our son was talking about an eye pad, not an iPad.  He was saying that he wanted to put an eye pad over his eye, and play pirates with his friends.